Hi, today is my first day, my trip was great, all it was fine...
when I arrive in the airport, Im feel happy with the snow and run to see, I feel dow rsss, in my first day Im "quase" go to hospital rss..
now im fine, my room is very confortable and warm...
please coments in english and correct wrongs
Isabela is my english teacher but se dont know write is dificult understand what she sad, rss
kisses
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Hey!! Glad to know the trip went safe! Is it as cold as they say in there?! =P
ResponderExcluirAbout the corrections...do you really want it!? I can do it for you..just feel free to stop me whenever you feel like it..OK?! =]
Starting..
1.When you say arrive..you arrive AT a place..not IN..so..you arrivED AT the airport!
2. You are FEELING happy..or you FELT happy and RAN to see IT..you FELT DOWN..and in your first day you ALMOST WENT to the hospital.
Well..hope I helped...have a nice stay there!
Enjoy!!!
Kisses
Juh Donegah
Ah.. one more thing...
ResponderExcluirI loved the blog´s title. Hehe!
Jota and I are here in Araraquara and we are sending good thoughts for you...
ResponderExcluirCongratulations to your blog!
Kisses
We miss you!